How does Napoleon use his power to control the
animals?
Like he is more intelligent than the other animals he
tell them that everything he says is good, and the animals believe in him
because they trust in what he says. Other way to persuade the animals is with
propaganda, thing that Napoleon uses a lot when he say the animals that these
is the “Animal Farm” and that what they are doing is just for the animals. Napoleon
always makes the animals think what he want them to think. He tell the animals
that they are going in the correct way and that everything they do is just for
them benefit, that all the things they do is just for them, for what they need
and for what they want. Napoleon has the control because he inculcates the
animals fear, the dogs help Napoleon because the dogs are just like his army,
Napoleon is like Hitler, when there are lots of people who were obsessed with
him, and lots of people who don’t, and they are like repressed by the army. This
is how everything works.
Napoleon lies to the animals, he tells them that the amendment
hasn’t change, that what he says is good, is the best for everyone. For example,
Napoleon always tell Boxer, that he is like his bodyguard, and that he has to
keep going on with him. Boxer is the one who works harder, the dogs are the
army of Napoleon, the kens and the rest of the animals just do what Napoleon
says without refusing. This is How his world works, but not for much time…
Your work mentions some good points, but you have not used P.E.A to develop and explain any of your ideas in detail. It is always better to focus on fewer points, but describe them in a lot of detail, than to give a woolly idea of lots of general without giving any evidence to support your opinion.
ResponderBorrarGood: you have recognised why the animals believe what Napoleon says and equated the story to similar events in world histoy.
Needs work: include much more analysis, and pay attention to your basic grammar. Revise present simple verbs in 3rd person singular.