Boxer and the magical kick
Right from the start Boxer and the
animals were planning how to show Mr. Jones who rules. The animals planned all
the fight, their positions and what does each animal will do. Here we will come
with our star Mr. Boxer.
How do you fell
with all this adrenaline and power that you have in your hooves? "Well, this
entire plan wasn’t really a good plan for me, but I got the moment, my moment
and I just did it. First I fell really well, because all my friends were
telling me I am the best and things like that, but then I felt bad and I just
wanted to turn back in time and don’t kill Mr. Jones. I don’t appreciate him a
lot but I know he will be always with us.”
Now we will have an interview with
our undercover agent Ms. Sally McMollekdon. Ms. Sally, when you were flying
above the fight, did you saw how Boxer takes his magical kick?
“Yes, I was flying above the fight
and watching everything from the sky. I was really focused on the fight, when I
saw Boxer running in the direction of Mr. Jones, and the he took his kick, that
was awesome. That was the first time, in all my years working for this company
that I have seen a kick like that, this will make history, how can a little
group of animals can take control of a farm and kill the farmer. And that wasn’t
just a simple farmer, he was Mr. Jones. Mr. Jones, I know how he works, I know
every step he took for have all his merits, and I know that now he is just some
irrelevant human.”
There is some nice work here, well done. The description of the action is clear and exciting, and the reporter captures the euphoria of the animals very well. The choice of undercover reporter is clever, giving the readers a very unusual perspective on events.
ResponderBorrarThe style and format of the report is very informal, more like a television interview than a written newspaper report. Always be aware of your writing style and make sure it is appropriate for the task. You also failed to include an image and an expert commentary as we discussed in class.
Good effort.